Appreciating the way you bring the reader close-in. The line "To be alive is to enter a never-ending cycle of separations" ...ahhhh...that really landed in me. Love the imagery " safe within the soft container, pillowed and feathered and hydrated ..." and the soft yellow image that accompanies the writing. Thank you, Suzi Tucker.
I love so much in here... one thing i can name is how you navigate (negotiate) time in this piece, and in many pieces, come to think of it. The safety of time being linear feels to me suspended, and I feel free to explore ... something else.
Appreciating the way you bring the reader close-in. The line "To be alive is to enter a never-ending cycle of separations" ...ahhhh...that really landed in me. Love the imagery " safe within the soft container, pillowed and feathered and hydrated ..." and the soft yellow image that accompanies the writing. Thank you, Suzi Tucker.
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I love so much in here... one thing i can name is how you navigate (negotiate) time in this piece, and in many pieces, come to think of it. The safety of time being linear feels to me suspended, and I feel free to explore ... something else.
Oh, thank you, Po. So much.